"Hey lets go start a fire" Jack said. I honestly did'nt want to before thinking through and the possible consequnses. To me it seemed wrong to go up there all of a sudden without thinking it tohugh. The little kids seemed all excited from the idea but really at thier young age I would not expect them to understand the way that I was thinking. Everyone started to run forward and up the mountain which seemed very unsafe.
"Hey watch out at least, there might be some snakes or somthing". I might have been wrong but you can never be to careful. As everyone started to run up every thing started to warp into disary and right into Jack's clutches. The conch being the only last shred of hope for civilization. I wanted to tell everyone to stop and I did but nothing much would come out of me besides a small whisper. With the smaller children excited I thought that this was the start of the extinction for civilization. we could be here a while so I had to do somthing. Jack looked bakc at me and looked at me scornfully. Everyone got the top of the mountain and started to get wood for the fire. Once it was all colected everyone just stood there and stared at the giant pile of wood. This made me feel smart and a reason for Ralph to listen to me more. Then Jack takes my glasses officiously and seemed to like the violent effort he was putting forth to get them. Using them to reflect then sun thourgh them which casued sparks and started the fire. As the fire started the little children started to tumult causing a giant up roar. I looked at Ralph and he seemed like he was being challeged by Jack. I had an inrestible urge to say " I have the conch"
"Shut up fatty" Jack said. Then I broke out and started yelling. Then Jack told me to shut up and came up with a plan to keep the fire going as the we were stuck on the isalnd. I decided to try and follow this one nimble boy to carry out my plan of creating huts at the beach, it was not very easy getting people to listen even harder. I thought this would the end of civilization on the island.......
Wednesday, January 30, 2008
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Robles-
Perhaps some spelling checking would be good. I noticed a few errors. Please finish your amazing story. It seems to be turning out well.
-Emma
aloh robles, i like how you started your uh paragraph with dialougue, yea nice, =P
-Jack =]
Jack's stupid (just saying)
shweet story
--rawr--
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