Monday, January 28, 2008
Stuck in a island
I woke up right by a tree only to see some canine creature licking my face. As I got up the creature ran. I clambered up a tree only to see nothing but more trees and thick lussh green brush surrounding me. I started to walk towards the beach as I could see an opening in the brush I saw a lagoon. I decided jump in there becuase on the island it was very very hot. I thought that. As soon as I got in I as I heard a loud growl in the distance thatr pallored me. I thought of running but was to frozen in fear. I decided to duck and hopfuly while being submerged what ever was maknig the sound would leave if it didnt spot me. As I can back up my vision was blurred fom the water only to hear a tall boy vainly laughing at me and I was embarssed. I got out of the water and quivered as I got out of the lagoon slowly. His clothes looked very decourus comapred to mine now. but i was glad atleast I was not alone on this ilsand place thing. I seemed like he was going to talk again but something sounded that interposed his speech. It was a very strident noise. not very pleasurable then I started to hear footsteps running to the sound. I decided to follow it seeing as how everyone else was going for it. I heard some chatter. Lets specualte about who should be chief. I got there and there were around 50 boys there. I felt indignation becuase no one would fill me in. They all seemed in a jumble as they were all discusing somthing about the chief buissness. They were all in little circles i felt like I was in a grateing because no would let me in. They seemed to devour the older boys as htey surronded them.
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I really like how youdescribed each scene, like this part...
"I thought of running but was to frozen in fear. I decided to duck and hopfuly while being submerged what ever was maknig the sound would leave if it didnt spot me."
hello robles as zoe said i liked how u described each scene, but u kindof used some words alot and you need to use spell check, but besides that it was a very good story
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