Wednesday, February 27, 2008

Blog 10 Piggy Died

Waking up this morning was hard phisicaly and and mentaly for the both of us. We got up and starting poking at Ralph wating to see what comands he would give us. We had to admit that this seemed really hopeless seeing as how he was asleep and it seems that its hopless when hes asleep and Sam started worring about if a ship had passed by during the night time. But oh well it would not matter. As the day passed Ralph decided to go Jack's and his crazy saveges' encampment and raid or at least try to reason with them to get back the fat guy's glasses what was his name? Oinkster, Oink-person, OOO Piggy ya piggy lets go with that one. It was not a risk that we were willing to take but Ralph was our leader so we had to. A couple of minutes later we were by the cliffs were we could hear the rush of water which was very scary for the both of us. When Jack showed up that was worse then looking down at the sea at the bottom of the cliff. Watching them fight aginst each other was even worse becuase we felt powerles at that point becuase we physicaly could not do anything even if we tried to make some kind of a difference. As the violence continued I heard something scarping. It sounded like 2 objects made out of the exact same materials were rubbing up aginst each other alomst like nails aginst a chalk board. Then the horrible sight came into our view. Even though our view was limited. We did.nt turn around to see the full details of things but we did get to see Piggy's body drop and hit the ocean. At that point we knew that our chances of staying with Ralph were over beuase he seemed to loose all confidence and so did we.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Anthony,

This blog didn't make sense to me in the beginning. Why wouldn't Sam-n-Eric not know Piggy's name they have been with him for 'i guess' 2 to 3 months now? I was also confused with some of the sentences in the beginning.
Even though the beginning was confusing to me i really liked your ending, but i think you should add a little more about the fight between Jack and Ralph. also make sure to include all the things that Mr. Shaddox asked us to -

1) The theft of Piggy's glass and, consequently, no signal fire.
2) The trip to Castle Rock
3) The struggle between Ralph and Jack
4) The death at Castle Rock
5) Being forced to join Jack's tribe

-- Katie Brooks

Maya said...

This blog was good, but it got a little confusing. It jumped around a lot, and think you should break up your blog into paragraphs.
Your blog was also very brief. Make sure to include all the things Mr. Shaddox said to put in the blog.
There were also a couple of spelling errors.
I really liked how you described Piggy as Oinkster/Oink Person, its really showed that they didn't really know much about Piggy, even if they have been around each other a lot. I really like the ending where you say Ralph had lost all of his confidence.

Markusballa said...

I didn't really understand your blog, but I could see that you were trying very hard to convinc us that yours was good just fixit up a little bit more.